Thursday, October 1, 2015

Be a {blog} reader

·         I read this book about a year ago, and i fell in love with it. I love how even though we don't really know what sex A is, there can still be a bit of romance. "I looked at this excerpt in a way that I understand what the main character is talking about, he saying that he gotten used to the fact that he simply has gotten numb to the fact of changing bodies every night." I love the way you worded this. Has simply gone numb to the fact, is really cool sounding.

·         "And someone who forgets to wipe would be classified as a human". What?? Creative??

·         This is probably my favorite post of yours that I have read so far. I love that you respect the book, because books are pretty rad. They don't really need any further defiling.

·         "The first line last line thingy thing" Your title is quite pimpin' if I do say so myself. I have not read either of the books you wrote about, but they sound pretty cool. I think you should read though, reading is pretty cool. Some people don't have the ability to read, so you should cherish what God has given you.

·         "I am a cave, empty yet deep." This is a really good line. I love the way you describe yourself with such detail. Right on!

·         " and also Curse words" I love that you think the world would be better without swearing. I do disagree with that though. Now, i don't think people should go around making fun of one another and swearing at each other, but its a way to express yourself. When you are angry you are not going to scream about gumdrops and unicorns. You are going to swear, because it is a way to get it all out.

·         " I want to be able to take my kids out for ice cream to celebrate their good grades, or the end of another year of school. Having a family would make my life (especially my adult life) complete, because I would always have people to come home to, rely on, and love." You are probably the only teenager i know that dreams of having children. I respect that a lot. I think that more people who have kids should want to have them. Too many mothers are out there, who treat their kids like shit, just because they were an accident. I think that you will be a great mom, and i hope very good things happen in your future.

·         This is a gorgeous piece. I legit got chills when i read this line, "Silence is a dead man’s breath". Thank you for that, keep on writing.

·         "I am a mind too wise for its time, bound to misfortune" that makes you sound like a kind of kung fu master. That is pretty cool.

·         Rock on, man!


·         "We fear being humiliated at the hands of others due to our short comings" That is ever so moving. It really speaks to my soul. 

1 comment:

  1. Thanks for taking the time read your classmates' work. I know they appreciate your encouragement.

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