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I read this book about a year ago, and
i fell in love with it. I love how even though we don't really know what sex A
is, there can still be a bit of romance. "I looked at this excerpt in a
way that I understand what the main character is talking about, he saying that
he gotten used to the fact that he simply has gotten numb to the fact of
changing bodies every night." I love the way you worded this. Has simply
gone numb to the fact, is really cool sounding.
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"And someone who forgets to wipe
would be classified as a human". What?? Creative??
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This is probably my favorite post of yours
that I have read so far. I love that you respect the book, because books are
pretty rad. They don't really need any further defiling.
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"The first line last line thingy
thing" Your title is quite pimpin' if I do say so myself. I have not read
either of the books you wrote about, but they sound pretty cool. I think you
should read though, reading is pretty cool. Some people don't have the ability
to read, so you should cherish what God has given you.
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"I am a cave, empty yet deep."
This is a really good line. I love the way you describe yourself with such
detail. Right on!
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" and also Curse words" I
love that you think the world would be better without swearing. I do disagree
with that though. Now, i don't think people should go around making fun of one
another and swearing at each other, but its a way to express yourself. When you
are angry you are not going to scream about gumdrops and unicorns. You are
going to swear, because it is a way to get it all out.
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" I want to be able to take my
kids out for ice cream to celebrate their good grades, or the end of another
year of school. Having a family would make my life (especially my adult life)
complete, because I would always have people to come home to, rely on, and
love." You are probably the only teenager i know that dreams of having
children. I respect that a lot. I think that more people who have kids should
want to have them. Too many mothers are out there, who treat their kids like
shit, just because they were an accident. I think that you will be a great mom,
and i hope very good things happen in your future.
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This is a gorgeous piece. I legit got
chills when i read this line, "Silence is a dead man’s breath". Thank
you for that, keep on writing.
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"I am a mind too wise for its
time, bound to misfortune" that makes you sound like a kind of kung fu
master. That is pretty cool.
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Rock on, man!
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"We fear being humiliated at the
hands of others due to our short comings" That is ever so moving. It
really speaks to my soul.
Thanks for taking the time read your classmates' work. I know they appreciate your encouragement.
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