Pieces from around the room

I read a lot of peoples papers, and i really enjoyed them. I really like the fact that in this class we can breathe with our assignments. The people in the group i was put in did a fantastic job with their pieces. Each piece was completely different from the other, and i respect that. Tanner's post gave me the chills, where as Laura's post gave me tears that welled up in my eyes, and it all ended with a laugh from Jordan's funny trash can piece.  

                      Yo Jordan, I think your piece was pretty cool. When I first saw what you were writing, I was a little skeptical as to how interesting it would be. But, you made it really funny, and I enjoyed reading it. My favorite line was "they were stuck in misery, or Missouri as it’s also called", comedy gold. I am glad that I had read your piece.
                    Hola Tanner, I really did enjoy the chilling factor that was Incorporated into your piece. I like the words you used, like shivered and pleading insanity. It all made it sound super spooky, Keep writing.
                   Hola Laura, this was, absolutely marvelous. I really love the fact that you didnt draw this from any experience that you already had. I loved the way you told the story, it made me want to read more. Great job.